Slice of life #2

Once I was 4 years old and I was going to work with my mom and our neighbor Came out with his dog rusty and my mom said hi to the neighbor and rusty saw me and he jumped on me and tripped me and I started crying that my mom was scared and our neighbor said it was ok so he got rusty off of me and when I got up I was all slobbered on because the dog was on me and I ran to my mom and cried more.

One thought on “Slice of life #2”

  1. I don’t love slobber either! Maybe punctuation would help your readers understand the story better?

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